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Like I said before, this is just wonderful. And this sounds a lot better now it's mixed and mastered...

You've inspired me.

And you're right, Newgrounds doesn't have a Genre for this.

And if you put it under 'Misc' then no one see's it.

Southwest-Statistic responds:

Somebody needs to add an "Acoustic" genre to Newgrounds.

Fancy a record deal mate?

This is the best piece of music I have heard in months, including stuff I hear in the charts and such. Man, are you signed? If not, you've got a huge chance of being signed! I'm not kidding... I love your voice, and your just... so... original in your playing, combining the sound effects of the jungle with your guitar, then with the other strings and stuff you've thrown in there, it's just amazing.. you've really inspired me...I've listened to this so much I've learned the lyrics and I'm singing along, and it takes a lot to be able to do that, believe me. I love this. This is just beautiful... I can't praise you enough. This needs to go out there man, send this on a demo press pack or something if you aren't signed... I love this... I just love it...

I'm sorry

This is just plain shit, really it is. Slipknot fans might like this, but it really isn't any good at all, it's annoyingly off key, sounds rubbish, you haven't double tracked the rhythm at all to make it sound better to the ear, you havent done anything with it actually, it's just...crap..a random riff that sounds shit and some off key shredding.

Try again...

speedmetalmessiah responds:

Ouch man that was harsh.Oh well everybody has their own opinions.

Thanks for the review I'll be sure to double track the rhythm next time.

I like this

You're obviously adept at how to use a multi track recorder, I wonder what you are using.. I could probably help you with fixing clarity issues and leveling, and making it sound a lot beefyer if you like.

AIM: SerionBlue
EMail/MSN: tradebox_93@hotmail.com

Damn good bit of work, your shredding is good, need to work a little on your technique though, making it flow a little more, you also need to get some rhythmic stuff sorted out for your rhythm and such.

Still, damn good!

Uhh..

Hmm.. the riff is good, but it really doesn't build up to anything good. I was expecting it to build up to something really heavy with a great beat, it deserves that, but it just keeps wavering and not building up, a climax where it just goes BOOM into that riff with full guitars and a crazy beat would sound awesome.

I would like to try something with this, with your permission, so if you get this, contact me via AIM: SerionBlue or MSN: tradebox_93@hotmail.com

Thankies! Its quite good by the way, just needs a little more structuring.

Haha

You were high when you did this werent you? gwahaha brilliance

LMAO

ROTFL THIS IS GREAT!!!

AHEAHEAEHAHAHAHHAHAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This is just like.. this should be the FACT theme or something, the federation against Copyright Theft.

LMFAO!! THIS OWNS......

Printajinx responds:

Reviewed by: -HaZard-

Thanks a whole shitload man. This was inspired by our fuckgnarled Starcraft patch.

Mmmm nah

It's the chords to Green Day- American Idiot jumbled up a bit, it has no pattern and doesn't flow very well, just a bunch of power chords. Might have a use though, but not really for me.

Jakspeed responds:

Well yes it is the chords to American Idiot, but the melody is much different. And the end is pretty messed up but I'm changing that.

It's alright..

(NOTE: My Overall score is averaged now)

This would sound awesome with reverb on it.. like it was in a massive hall.

[If I may, please contact me via AIM SerionBlue or email tradebox_93@hotmail.com, if I could take this and do a few things to it? I won't wreck it and I will consult you and you will be the author, I just want to try a couple of things]

Sounds good though. ^^

...meh..

(NOTE: I now give the Overall as an average of all the scores given.)

It's alright.. it starts really good and i expect the big bass to come in, it seems to be building up to something good but it just ... dies. I don't think i'd use it because it's, to be honest with you, not that well thought out.

All the essentails are there, it has potential but...

o.o

HouseMasta responds:

i understand. i think....?
thanks for the honesty?? lol

If you would like to contact me about anything, please use my AIM Screenname, SerionBlue, or email me: tradebox_93@hotmail.com All songs I make are 100% free for you to use. Thanks.

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